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05-08-2006, 12:03 PM
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Lyrics to a song I wrote
okay ppl I need your honest opinion on this I wrote this song about a week ago and I was just wondering what you all thought
Can't Go Back
Verse
Do I have it in me, to change into who I need to be
and become what's inside of me
cause lately i can't see, what's in front of me
now it seems I'm slipping away
Chorus
Now I'm falling back, now I'm losing track
Now i can't go back to who I used to be
Now I'm gaining slack, now I'm fighting the black
Now I can't go back to who I used to be
Verse
Too many times I've said, too many times I've bled
for the ones out to hurt me
But now I'm drawing the line, gonna leave you all behind
cause you can't stop what's inside of me
Chorus
Solo
Chorus
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05-08-2006, 01:56 PM
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interesting...very interesting
I like it and it sounds really interesting. The only problem is that there is no music to it. Other than that, it sounds totally awesome!
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05-08-2006, 02:06 PM
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Originally Posted by chaotic xin
I like it and it sounds really interesting. The only problem is that there is no music to it. Other than that, it sounds totally awesome!
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Yeah i really like it too
and it be even better if we could have the music 2 it!!
i hope you can share it with us!
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05-08-2006, 02:07 PM
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I don't think we can help anyone...
family, friends no one.
I decide to live for your sake.
Yes, it was my decision...
I think... that i want to be
forgivin... yes...
I want to be forgivin
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05-08-2006, 02:50 PM
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Awsome lyrics but like the others said its too bad we can't hear it.
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05-08-2006, 09:59 PM
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I could totally write music to that,,,, but i dun wanna.... its not my style.  if you ASKED me to i prolly woiuld... cuz im nice like that.
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05-11-2006, 08:38 AM
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sounds k. what kind of music would it go to?
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05-13-2006, 01:04 PM
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well I would say kinda of a mix of music that might go with creed and hoobestank thats kinda music
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05-13-2006, 03:11 PM
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Originally Posted by Maxxim
well I would say kinda of a mix of music that might go with creed and hoobestank thats kinda music
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I can hear that happening with the lyrics. cool.
Last edited by chaotic xin; 05-13-2006 at 03:13 PM.
Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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11-13-2006, 02:27 PM
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okay so I sent the lyrics to my buddy's band and they made the song here it is
2lyricscgb
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