there is a spark in our slightest of touches
a warmth in my stomach's heart
but this must be love?

a sparkle in your reflective eyes
tells me all I need to ever know

but why? You ask so prettily
it is something I can hardly describe.

perhaps it is your sweetest smirk
or your sugared eyes
your soft words
or your solid form
ready to hold
stroke
or
support

surely that is not all though, after all there is more to love

that intellectual innocence
the childish maturity
this humor of humors
(you're funnier than you think you know)

you are everything I thought I wanted
and more than that
everything I wished I could be

I could go on forever
if you let me
describing your face
in every sunset
each floating cloud
a single blade of grass

and how your name echo's in my ears
at every moment of everyday
at any mention
of a syllable
rhyming
your name

love that so many have claimed
is what I suggest
is mine
ours,
shared

and when shall I ever stop if not now, love?

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Arcángel

At Home on the Toast (48)

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This, I have to say, is one of your better ones.

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Formerly known as El Subestimado
Mi ma'i, mi amor de mi vida: SpicedSugar
Mis hijos: Butterfingered (missing)
Mi hermanita: Dancesintheran, my brother-in-law: Edge_Of_Insanity
Mi Primita: Keena

javagirl87

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i really like these this part. it reminds me of how when you really love someone you see everything in them. they are every part of everything you want. even if they are opposites.

i also like it because the 2nd part "everything i wished i could be". it reminds me of when someone told me the greatest thing a person can do for you is to make you want to be a better person. this is somethig not many people can do in this world...and when you can have that affect on someone, or them for you, it's the greatest thing in the world.