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Old 07-25-2008, 01:42 PM
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She sits upon the window sill staring at the rain
and with every crash of thunder she's reminded of the pain.
Painted in her memory, he is nothing but a stain.
Constantly reminded her life will never be the same.

Lightening lights up her dreary face,
slowly...she gently turns away.
Yesterday she fell from grace
and there she'll surely stay.

Battered, bruised and tossed aside
left without hope for tomorrow.
Without even the sweetest lie,
her body will shortly follow.
Firmly she is forced to abide
by the men who are so hollow.
Eaten away by the sickness inside
it's getting harder to swallow.




For some reason, someone those this was about me. It isn't. It is just random.
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Old 07-25-2008, 02:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Probably you 4 years ago.
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Very good. I wish I could write stuff like that. My poems are so cheesey they should be put on crackers.
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Old 07-25-2008, 10:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
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Nice poems. I love how mad a freakin SONNET!!! That's awesome!!! And the first part of it, two groups of couplets. Awesome! I didn't catch it at first, but I did the second time. Nice.
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Haha. Thank you. ^_^
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Well written As random as it is, It's a tragic thing to go through. I wouldn't want to walk that path..
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Like I said, I feel like it was based off her past. Even though she said it wasn't.
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It could be?
It came from my mind...so maybe.
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And in your mind you have memories...that happened in the past.
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