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Old 02-11-2008, 07:14 PM
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I float,
a shadow
hallowed crow,
through the glassy threshold
into the sunset.

My hand
reaches at the impossible
shimmer.

A surprised palm
grazes the hard handle of a silver sword
easily extracted
from the moist dirt and the golden grass.

Light, suited
to the untamed hand
bare feet brace
against grassy carpet.

The sun dips
behind the horizon,

I am blinded.

The stars explode
flooding the dark sky
with ethereal light..

A shimmering shape
invades the empty space.

Silver haired boy,
wise eyed child.

He whispers into my ear wondrous falsehoods,

I blink.
I breathe.

Take my hand,
he murmurs,
I will take you Away.
Away.
Away.
Away.

The sword in my hand gains weight,
I lift,
I thrust.

The stars disappear.
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I like this poem. It has a sort of medeval feel to it when I run it through my head.
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