This

03-20-2006, 07:32 AM

This

Sometimes I think I've said too much
When I haven't said a thing,
Sometime's I haven't said enough
When I've told you everything.
Sometime's I think I've got too close
When we're standing miles apart,
And you say I'm not close enough
When we're standing heart to heart.
I can't believe the mess we're in,
With nothing left but this.
A shattered silence fills the air,
And nothing's left but this.

This is a song really. I wrote it about the breakdown of my parents relationship, and the simultaneous breakdown of my relationship with both of them.

**BeachBum** · 03-20-2006, 01:32 PM

OMG! it's pretty good! I've felt like that before too!

DEAD VEGGIE · 03-20-2006, 01:49 PM

wow i loved that.
10/10 since you didn't put up a poll.

03-20-2006, 01:52 PM

amazing poem/song. good job

03-21-2006, 02:29 PM

Awww thanks very much dudes.

*wanders off to refresh herself on how to do polls*

SV

04-05-2006, 11:21 PM

I loved this poem. It is very moving and touches the heart. I do love poems to which I can relate. I would love to see you post some more of your work