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Chad: Follow or Die
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05-01-2008, 05:33 PM
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Second Dimensions
Sitting, tripping Over thinking Waiting, waking Meditating Sitting, tripping Over thinking Inciting, writing Inviting light in Sitting, tripping Over thinking Racing, tasting Overtaking As this existence Flips its scripting Adrift and shifting As dimensions live In a mist all amidst First in spirit Dreaming Second Dimensions Physical senses Living freely As seconds rush To feeling Second perceptions Seconds of love Seconds of seeing Whole truths of one’s being As seconds come to meaning As seconds love Firstly spirit Breathing Second Dimensions Seconds to One Moment Second to none As heavens touch This second And second beckons seconds To second this second As heavens touch This second And second beckons seconds To second the seconds As seconds make love Giving birth to new seconds And can’t get enough Perceptions in senses All love, awe struck With every second No time to pause for a minute For fear of losing the present Still right here in this second In one moment’s dimension
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This one, this form I hold now. Embracing you, this reality here, This one, this form I hold now, so Wide eyed and hopeful. Wide eyed and hopefully wild." -Tool 
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05-01-2008, 06:40 PM
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05-02-2008, 09:10 AM
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I know how I would read the poem, and the rhythmn works for me, but it's helpful to hear how readers hear it. Maybe I'll put this one to music and it will be more clear.
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This one, this form I hold now. Embracing you, this reality here, This one, this form I hold now, so Wide eyed and hopeful. Wide eyed and hopefully wild." -Tool |
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