let us drown in all the colors
with all the things that we've discovered
that everybody hates each other
your sister even hates your brother
she's operating undercover
to destroy your demands
all of your plans
all you've ever had

then, you say "hey!"
and then it all fades to grey
next, you pull out hope
and then it all fades to black
and you wake up in a pool of red
with everything that they ever said
spattered from their toes to their head

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I love love love it babeh :0
.. I like how you come up with amazing stuff out of no where..
And I love how you put your thoughts into words We should seriously start publishing your stuff hee hee..

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HeartAttack t!nGles My j!Ngles!!!! Yup, that he does.

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hehe thanks baaabeh. It was weird because I was just lying there and all the sudden the words started flowing in my head. Turned out good though

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Way cool poem, the flow is awesome.

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Thanks a lot! Glad you like it

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Indeed I didn't even feel you get up and start writing.. I thought I was half awake.. >.> See what you do to me!?

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Haha!

Indeed, love...

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