A story in an anime called "Blood+" inspired me to write this. It's actually the beginning of a song I'm writing. The characters and situations in the story are very touching and I was just inspired to write this because of that:

Eat me alive now.
Just trust me, I think you'll like it.
Waving goodbye now.
Fine, I'll admit it - I'm angry.
You're dying; you're dead now.
Oh, and it's my fault, so I'm sorry.
The ashes are gone now.
They blew away with the memories.

Just bite my neck and suck it dry,
along with our hopes and dreams.
You're such a wreck, just look at your eyes.
They're red with that agony.
Just take me now, then run away,
killing everyone and everything.

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The words look good. What's the tempo for the song, fast, slow? Is it gonna be like a rap?