I felt like this for a few years and I finally decided to write about it. See what you think of Only A Dream.



Sleeping like a baby
Easy to wake
The child is asleep in her crib

Even the littlest noise wakes the child
She cries
Mother is no where near by
She cries even louder
Still no mommy

A neighbor hears her cries
He opens the door
Sees her face full of tears

He takes her in his arms
The girl settles down
The neighbor notices the father
Fallen into a drunken sleep

The cops come to take the child
Now she lives in a foster home

No longer are her tears unheard
She doesn't cry much anymore
Her new parents come to her
Everytime she cries

The old parents are now in jail
Charged with neglect

The baby girl is safe now

Sleeping like a baby
Very easy to wake
wakes to an opening door

She begins to cry
... It was only a dream.

frozenbeauty08

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wow...i can see that there was a lot of thought put into this...it's quite touching would make a great Lifetime Original Movie

Alyse Christine

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Aww Thanks.

Arcángel

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It has a bit of a narrative tone to it but, the visualization of what you are writing about compensates for that. I like it.

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