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06-07-2008, 01:37 AM
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Noob in Training
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Modesto, California
Age: 17
Posts: 69
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Love Waits
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you don't give up on love.
no, im not done yet.
she has my heart.
theres nothin i can do.
its tearing me apart, but.
guess all i can do is wait.
forever if it takes.
love waits..
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lemme know what you think.
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I am weak now, for I am alone, but give me you, and together, watch us conquer the world.
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06-07-2008, 01:39 AM
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Devourer of Hollows
Posts: 2,502
Age: 23
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hmm, you are an old n00b aren't you? I think I have seen you in the past, but you rarely post. Oh yea, and good poem. |
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06-07-2008, 01:40 AM
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Noob in Training
Posts: 69
Age: 17
Join: May 2006
Location: Modesto, California
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yea its been a really long time since i've been active on here..
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I am weak now, for I am alone, but give me you, and together, watch us conquer the world.
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06-07-2008, 01:41 AM
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Devourer of Hollows
Posts: 2,502
Age: 23
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holy crap! over a year without posting anything then comes back!! |
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06-07-2008, 01:43 AM
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Posts: 470
Age: 16
Join: Jul 2007
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Love can't wait the people you love die or something you going to feel bad that didn't say nothing before the die or left but Neat peom.
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By Mary <3 Hopefully Your Halloween Well Be Awesome
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06-07-2008, 01:48 AM
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Noob in Training
Posts: 69
Age: 17
Join: May 2006
Location: Modesto, California
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yea.. been busy and stuff, moved and all that..
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I am weak now, for I am alone, but give me you, and together, watch us conquer the world.
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06-10-2008, 07:33 AM
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I am weak now, for I am alone, but give me you, and together, watch us conquer the world.
I really like this line, sounds made deep. 
Your is poem good, I like how it reads like a conversation. |
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06-10-2008, 07:48 AM
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Senior Member
Posts: 5,031
Age: 17
Join: Apr 2007
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Originally Posted by Zyanya
Love can't wait the people you love die or something you going to feel bad that didn't say nothing before the die or left but Neat peom.
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Oh, it can wait. But it'll tear you up in the process.
The poem: goddamn you for pegging me exactly, at the moment. Nice.
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half of what i say is meaningless.
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06-10-2008, 07:49 AM
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Mr. EFG
Posts: 14,332
Join: Feb 2007
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Hey, it sounds like me too! Just not angry enough!
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"Everyone is stupid except me."
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I can handle you...and your sexy parties.
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