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Old 03-30-2008, 08:51 PM
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Lighting is Everything

Lighting is Everything


I had not seen the dusted daylight enter the room before
it was not what I had expected
(lighting is everything)

a color which reminded me of my morning coffee
covered the walls
(I like my coffee the way I like my men)
it was not what I had expected

very unlike picture I had so diligently schemed

as the browning mattress springs sang their raspy
(not to mention off key)
lullaby
rocking us to sinful sleep

crud encrusted dishes which covered every surface
or
the clutter of used and crumpled receipt paper
or
the writhing pile of clothes, which wrestled with the dishes
hiding treasures
(or mice)
does he think them clean or dirty?

the patches of visible carpet
another mystery
thick yes
with grime?
indiscernible truth
the vomit colored
discount bin drop out

deliciously clashes
with the unexpected sheets
(that he has already vacated)
red
soft
(had he expected more then me?)

stretch, sit up, slow movement
seeing his eyes
as I never expected.
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as the browning mattress springs sang their raspy
(not to mention off key)
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rocking us to sinful sleep
This part, I cannot help but giggle a little at. You, adorable, definitely have a way with words.
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A bit odd.... in a completely good way!
I love it!!!
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This part, I cannot help but giggle a little at. You, adorable, definitely have a way with words.
Tehehe you picked up on my not so subtleness

Thanks for the love cutie!
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