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Chad: Follow or Die
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08-08-2008, 06:02 AM
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Insomnia
Tossing and turning; she cannot sleep.
In and out she goes. He isn't there to hold her. His scent lingers in the clothes. Without his warmth beside her she's constantly waking again just to see that he's still gone; when will this all end? Day by day, she goes on knowing soon he will return. That day approaches so slowly but time will not cease to burn. All of his things surround her. She could never forget. Forever bound by his charming; the choice she'll never regret.
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08-08-2008, 06:13 AM
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I do have a question though: "his charming"? Did you leave out a word?
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08-08-2008, 06:14 AM
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I just wrote that one last night around 1am. I didn't focus as much attention in it as I should have. I still liked the way it turned out though.
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