i wrote this after i finished a math test. "autumn"

03-30-2006, 07:17 PM

Autumn

So long to you just like Autumn
you have vanished

Out of my world
and into your atmosphere

The sounds of Autumn are still here
though

The leaves all fall but as
they did they left me
with those bare branches

I love to see
those bare branches

they remind me of you

You went from neutral and new
but your leaves started falling

Then I was the new born and
you were my
my soil my sunlight
the sunlight that kept me growimg

yet my sun went
away tears of rain replaced it

The rain helped me grow but I cannot
bloom without my sun

Autumn has passed and spring
has come as I start to grow
once more I look for the sun

Where is it hiding this time
behind an eclipse of trees and above
the soil it ascends

Autumn is coming once more
and with it the trees will die
once more and leave me

With bare branches
that I love

03-31-2006, 10:12 AM

really really pretty! I love it!