I love you

**calebeauty** · 03-09-2006, 07:47 PM

I Love You
what we had was a special thing
to me it was more than just a fling
im going crazy without you
as some people say you were my boo
some people call it puppy love
but to me you were my first love
i can't imagin my life without you
i just want you to know that i love you

this is a poem i wrote for my first love, but he has never seen it so yea
rate it and tell me what you think honestly

**Fuko** · 03-09-2006, 08:19 PM

Awe, thats so sweet!! <3 are you still with him?

Cause if you are I think you should show it to him

**calebeauty** · 03-09-2006, 08:23 PM

no im not but sometimes i wish i was

**Fuko** · 03-09-2006, 08:25 PM

Awe >.<

You were probably to pretty for him anyway LOL!

**calebeauty** · 03-09-2006, 08:42 PM

aww your sweet thanks fuko

DEAD VEGGIE · 03-09-2006, 09:59 PM

I like it but not as well as some of your others. Also are your poems always that short?

**calebeauty** · 03-09-2006, 10:03 PM

no but i cant find all my good ones. we're moving so i miss placed them, so bummed out about that

DEAD VEGGIE · 03-09-2006, 10:04 PM

Yeah moving sucks that was one of the worst parts of my parents getting divorced. haha.

**jennyjones** · 03-10-2006, 06:08 AM

You should rewrite them all in a journal or notebook. Moving is never fun, but losing stuff because of it is aweful, especially when it is important to you.

03-10-2006, 10:26 AM

I liked it.It was short but yet to the point how u felt.I'd love to read others if u have them.