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Old 09-21-2008, 09:44 PM
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A Heart, Digressed..

A Heart, Digressed...

Peace amid confusion means
The thoughts flow through and out to sea
A mind so busy, no bit too slow
Reeks all havoc but goes to show
The thoughts we have from day to day
Stumble out to the world, cut short their stay
Unformed, no edits, no filters, no plan
To the world itself, flows from one man

I saw tonight what I thought gone
In just one soul, one heart, his son
He showed his face, his wrists and heart
As he barred it all, the world apart
This night revealed that hope remains
For those still lost, confused, disdained
She walked beside me, this night at dusk
And sought for Him, he came as he must

Hand on her shoulder, and love from above
She commits it all, her thoughts and her love
To give it completely, her heart made light
To the One who shows us wrong from right
For just a moment, a fraction I could see
The hand of God show his cards to me
A weighty decision draped a heavier heart
Of who gave it all, to find where to start.

She made her decision and revealed it to me
To give it her best, unflinching, to he
That loves her completely, yet stands set apart
Priorities scattered, conflicting his heart
Amid my confusion still stands to this day
A thought among many, the one run astray
To wonder what if, could be, or to come
And hope for the best, as I wait for the sun.

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Please, let me know your impressions, and what you think the true thought of this poem is..
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Old 09-26-2008, 12:16 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Again this is beautiful, but I can no more presume to think what these words are meant to be, what you meant them to be than what they are... Lovely, visually compelling and seeming slightly sad.
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