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Old 07-01-2008, 06:11 AM
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The waves smash against her moonlit skin.
Her heart can only beat faster.
In and out they crash and pull.
The sea, her only master.

Forced to abide to the crashing tide
she's always longed to escape.
Forever bound by the crashing sound.
There's not much more she can take.
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Personally, I like "my" poem better...and I mean the poem you sent me, but I'm stealing.


Okay...I'm getting the feeling of stress out of this...and...maybe sexual innuendo...but I like it regardless. Good work.
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It's about a mermaid...
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I'm saying besides that. You know, poetry always has those hidden meanings or whatever, right?

Also: Mermaids=sexy.
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Not all poetry does. Hah.
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Well...umm...alot of it does! And I don't know poetry! I'm trying here!!
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Fail.
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;-; You make me sad...
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You make ME sad.

Bwah haha.
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I try not to! I really like your poetry...even if I don't get it.
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