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09-07-2008, 08:04 PM
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...is better than you.
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Ending Never
This tiny poem is just that: tiny. But I like it a lot:
For you, I'll fall forever
Like others would, just better
Like lovers should; together
Forever, ending never
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09-08-2008, 02:18 PM
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...is better than you.
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Originally Posted by El Subestimado
That's exactly how I am, man. As long as it comes from the heart.
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True-dat...
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Originally Posted by [ Jew Blaster ]
Well good job then. ^_^
I like it a lot.
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09-08-2008, 07:23 PM
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I've always loved the way you write, and I still think you should publish some of them Specially your stories!
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HeartAttack t!nGles My j!Ngles!!!! Yup, that he does.
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09-08-2008, 07:56 PM
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...is better than you.
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Thanks, love. If I end up finishing Human Perfect, then I'll definitely attempt to publish it. |
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09-08-2008, 08:34 PM
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And I'll have the fist copy!!
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HeartAttack t!nGles My j!Ngles!!!! Yup, that he does.
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09-08-2008, 08:39 PM
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Originally Posted by B!0H@Z@Rd
And I'll have the fist copy!!
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Lol at typos. =P
I like it's rhythm, I think that if you tried to keep expanding it might lose that.
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READ FOR COMPREHENSION!
Song currently possessing my soul: Don't have one, waiting to hear it.
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09-08-2008, 09:23 PM
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 My nails were getting to0o long! But I finally cut them hee hee.
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HeartAttack t!nGles My j!Ngles!!!! Yup, that he does.
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09-08-2008, 10:28 PM
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Originally Posted by ExM@N
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No problem. Keep writing.
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This world is full of fake titties and real assholes.
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09-08-2008, 10:33 PM
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Nice. Like a sugary sweet gumdrop. |
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