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Old 08-05-2008, 07:26 AM
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Dance
Dancing laces fill the air
she spins and spins and spins.
Falling down with no surprise
she gets up and starts again.

Practice to be perfect.
Be perfect for all of them.
She spins in pretty circles
just to please one man.

Painted up like a doll,
the face you see isn't hers.
Be what they want you to be
that's how this cruel world turns.

Left there, all alone
she will take her last sigh.
Constantly trying to please others.
All alone now, she still cries.
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Okay, yeah...these are depressing now...I demand a happy one.
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For some reason, I can't do happy. I never could. It pisses me off!
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You did happy that one time! The poem about us! The picnic one? Still my personal favorite of yours ever.
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Haha. That one was just goofy though.
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Yet another great piece from you. Good job.
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Haha. That one was just goofy though.
Goofy...but happy.
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Yet another great piece from you. Good job.

I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I like it. It may be sad, but it has emotion and makes u feel sorry for the woman in the poem.
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I am glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
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