Crying

03-17-2006, 10:21 PM

My little poem thats getting published in a poem book.

Crying

I'm crying to myself.
I'm crying to my friends.
I need help, but no one cares.
I have a life that isn't fair.
So hear my cry of lonelyness.
I wander if I truely have a friend.
If I do I don't know who it is.

By:me( Justine T.)

**Fuko** · 03-17-2006, 11:16 PM

DEAD VEGGIE · 03-17-2006, 11:19 PM

I agree with fuko. That is a tear jerker.

**calebeauty** · 03-18-2006, 01:50 PM

so sad but good

**Chad** · 03-19-2006, 12:29 AM

love it...

03-20-2006, 07:35 AM

That is really moving. Its a poem you empathise with the situation, even if you have never felt that way yourself. Brilliantly expressed.

SV