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Old 02-22-2008, 11:32 AM
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A couple more from your's truly...

The Things That I Defend

Today I stay outside
Out of the loop of all the confusion
Where one loses their name
And their truths
I feel just like that sound that you hear when I strum my strings
And just like the sensations that it rewards

Everything goes directly
But not everything in a straight line
The things that we are waiting for, it will happen
The importance of your presence
The burn of your absence
That provoke me and now I won’t bother changing you

I have right here
Deep inside of me
So agitating
But it’s the things that I am defending
Of all of these things here
The first of all is you
Now there’s no more because
Under your sign I live

So here I am annotating
How I’ve been rebuilt and preparing
To confront the world beside you
Because the days continue to pass
And the fear is something of the past
Because my emotions continue as they are
Saying this…

I have right here
deep inside of me
So agitating
But it’s the things that I am defending
Of all of these things here
The first of all is you
Now there’s no more because
Under your sign I live

I say Goodbye / Te Digo Adiós

I can't do this anymore
Can't hide it anymore
Take a seat, we need to talk
Look into my eyes
Quit crying
Accept what you've done
Be the woman you claim you are and admit to me what you've done

I feel as if the world is crumbling at my feet
And I just cannot understand how so many successes can end up in one big fraud
We've both fucked it up
And now, it's all done
I have no idea how it happened
But it transpired
Everything was perfect
Until the moment it was destroyed, what one day created
Dead from the stupidity
Dead is the love that i once felt
Silent is its heartbeat
Doctor calls the time of death
I call it time to move on

I say goodbye for all the times you've hurt me and the love that we had
Because not even you knew what you were feeling in your heart
I say goodbye to all the tears you've made me cry
But I will go on an up-note, I can't say that I never tried
So, fuck it, I say goodbye

From that moment we were a little off
We agreed to share everything, down to the deepest and darkets
But you hid that one little details
That one critical point, you somehow neglected to mention
You lied about that one spec of informationY
You said we were more than just best friends
So why couldn't you fill me in on that?
How convenient
You think you know a person
I don't feel lost though
I know where I'm going
Oye, ya tomé una decisión, te digo adiós
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Old 02-22-2008, 12:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like both of them!

You're talented...I'm jealous.
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Old 02-22-2008, 05:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like both of them too

Especially on the 1st one where it says:

"Everything goes directly
But not everything in a straight line"
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Wow! I wish I could write like that. Both of them are really good.
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Very nice! Perhaps writing runs in our family? lol =)
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