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Old 03-08-2006, 04:34 PM   1 links from elsewhere to this Post. Click to view. #1 (permalink)
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Betrayal
you shattered my heart
crumbled it to dust
you took the remains
like you took my trust
you treated me like trash
you betrayed me, you hurt me
just leave me alone
and let me be.
Old 03-08-2006, 05:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like.
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Old 03-08-2006, 06:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i like your poetry it is quite good
Old 03-08-2006, 10:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks all, ill put up more if you like!
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Do it up.
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It seems good. i felt a lot of emotion from it
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