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SenzaSerenade · 04-05-2008, 09:51 PM

Lights up; the sun awakens
The world is busy and bright
Constant cacophony surrounds my facade
My head is swimming in a sea of voices
Phrases are spoken softly, barely uttered
Passing through me with an air of fondness
Others are screamed shrilly
Cutting through like knives
But there's one strong voice shining through
It calms and soothes without effort
And my busy world stops spinning
The voice brings new colors to my eyes
Smooth blues of laughter, love, and friendship appear
As the harsh reds of betrayal and pain fade from view
And when the sun takes its last breath of the night
I know you'll be the only light I see.

04-05-2008, 09:51 PM	#1 (permalink)
SenzaSerenade Member Posts: 659 Age: 18 Join: Apr 2008 Location: North Dartmouth, MA	Poem, Need feedback plz? =] Lights up; the sun awakens The world is busy and bright Constant cacophony surrounds my facade My head is swimming in a sea of voices Phrases are spoken softly, barely uttered Passing through me with an air of fondness Others are screamed shrilly Cutting through like knives But there's one strong voice shining through It calms and soothes without effort And my busy world stops spinning The voice brings new colors to my eyes Smooth blues of laughter, love, and friendship appear As the harsh reds of betrayal and pain fade from view And when the sun takes its last breath of the night I know you'll be the only light I see. __________________ You danced, you drank, you laughed, you cried, You went to work and said goodbye I lived, I learned, stayed up all night, I'll see you when the time is right again...