Ristaron

I never cease to be amazed by some of the stuff that is posted here. This poem features a rollercoaster of emotions, with such a powerful ending. I usually prefer rhyme to prose, but the way this is written feels so... right.

I'm sorry that I don't have any constructive criticism.

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Originally Posted by Opunaya Haha! I love being in warm cum with balls on my ass while I'm pooping.