Well, the story is great but when she gets to the Abbey things get a little weird. And you can tell that Austen is making fun of her character but then she gets sent away by the General and every thing just moves so fast that it felt like she was bored with it. I thought it could have been better if she played up Mr Thorpe more. (Which was the man version of a Gold Digger) And had a sweeter ending with Mr Tinley (the hero).
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You are aesthetically pleasing,
the reason for which I first noticed in you.
And later I found your personality equally pleasing.
I also noted your chest to waist ratio is suitable for birthing.
Therefore, I think you should live in my house.